Rewrite the following: Luke, Unfortunately when you consolidate it, it took a lot of individuality and meaning out of some of the sections. If you need a condensed version you just drop the description to each pro/con. If you need a further condensed version I can help with that. The desirable section is also something that I can’t say I would agree with from a windows perspective. Futureproofing for example is something we would take very seriously. I would prefer you didn’t send this PowerPoint out until we can made adjustments together.

Dear Luke,

I regret to inform you that during the consolidation process, a significant amount of individuality and meaning has been lost from various sections. Should you require a more concise version, simply omitting the descriptions accompanying each pro/con might suffice. Should further condensation be necessary, I am available to provide assistance in that regard.

Furthermore, I must express my reservations regarding the content within the "desirable" section, particularly when viewed from a Windows perspective. Notably, the concept of futureproofing is of considerable importance to us. Thus, I find myself unable to fully align with the viewpoints presented.

I kindly urge you to refrain from circulating this PowerPoint presentation until we have had the opportunity to collaborate on the requisite adjustments.

Best regards, [Your Name]